The sun is shaped like a star the sun the sun is bright and the colour of the sun is red and it is about 93 million miles away from Earth and the sun is hot and if we were to far away it will be to cold the sun is the biggest and the sun never movies
Monday, August 9, 2021
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Kia ora Harper!
ReplyDeleteGreat work! I really feel that I learned a lot about the Sun from your post. Ka pai! I'm glad the Sun isn't further away, I hate the cold! Next time, see if you can put in the full stops between sentences!
Nic (Intern Teacher)
Hi Harper I learnt lots of things from your work. But there is no full stops maybe you could add some.You said movies instead of moves. I really like what you did. Layla
ReplyDeletehi harper I like your work because of all the facts in the story📃. But next time remember to use full stops. Have a great day
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